::: Bitterness :::
So I found some of my poetry I wrote when I was a lot younger, here's one of them:
Why The Salty Sting
My Face Scorched Red
I Laugh No More
Eyes Filled With Dread
The Bitter Pain Deep Inside
My Soul Sighing, Sighing, Sighing, Sighed.
Desire is no more
Thought's no longer fill my head
Tears are no more
My Eyes have dried, no more is said
The Bitter Pain Deep Inside
My Soul Crying, Crying, Crying, Cried.
A Shower Of Kind
With Pain Im Struck
Once Again I'm Blind
Emotions Left Amok
The Bitter Pain Deep Inside
My Soul Burning, Burning, Burning, Fried.
Hopeless In My Distress
I Should Just Lay and Die
I Will Not Ever Pass This Test
Let My Body Rot, My Spirit Fly
The Bitter Pain Deep Inside
My Soul Dying, Dying, Dying, Died.
The Slightest Glimmer
Lying In My Sight
The Burden Increasingly Painful
It's Reached A Brand New Height
The Bitter Pain Deep Inside
My Soul Lying, Lying, Lying, Lied.
But Is No More
It's Time Has Passed
Happier Than Before
Found Peace At Last
The Bitter Pain Deep Inside
My Soul Flying, Flying, Flying, High.
Tags: Bitterness, Youth, Escape,
Why The Salty Sting
My Face Scorched Red
I Laugh No More
Eyes Filled With Dread
The Bitter Pain Deep Inside
My Soul Sighing, Sighing, Sighing, Sighed.
Desire is no more
Thought's no longer fill my head
Tears are no more
My Eyes have dried, no more is said
The Bitter Pain Deep Inside
My Soul Crying, Crying, Crying, Cried.
A Shower Of Kind
With Pain Im Struck
Once Again I'm Blind
Emotions Left Amok
The Bitter Pain Deep Inside
My Soul Burning, Burning, Burning, Fried.
Hopeless In My Distress
I Should Just Lay and Die
I Will Not Ever Pass This Test
Let My Body Rot, My Spirit Fly
The Bitter Pain Deep Inside
My Soul Dying, Dying, Dying, Died.
The Slightest Glimmer
Lying In My Sight
The Burden Increasingly Painful
It's Reached A Brand New Height
The Bitter Pain Deep Inside
My Soul Lying, Lying, Lying, Lied.
But Is No More
It's Time Has Passed
Happier Than Before
Found Peace At Last
The Bitter Pain Deep Inside
My Soul Flying, Flying, Flying, High.
Tags: Bitterness, Youth, Escape,



Hey, Loaf, can you edit the last line for me please? Remove the d from "Sould". :-)