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by: Popcorn Popcorn 9th April 09 - Posted in: User Articles
My feelings are out of control
Too many decisions
Not enough thinking space
I want my head in the clouds
In that care free world
Where you fly when you walk
And you land on the stars
Looking at the big universe
Gazing at our small world
Seeing the wonders
And ignoring the point
Feeling the love
And combating the hate

Your faith is lost though
Tragedies have won
You search for the wrong
And try to fight what is right
You ignore your conscious
But not your instinct
You say your just trying to get by
But you take more than you need
And fail to control your greed

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Loaf
Loaf 9th April 09

Good poem, i think. Lol i mean, it holds a certain meaning to it. I would save love that did not go well? I think it holds more then that but that comes to mind first.

Popcorn
Popcorn 10th April 09

No, this one, is about stress and getting away, and the second stanza is about betrayal.

Loaf
Loaf 10th April 09

Really? Yea kinda see it. Dam interpretation :)

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